I know you said u had problems because Maggie's shoes were in most of the other cuts, but you can scale up the video (zoom), and crop the bottom. You can do that in the viewer in FCP. I had did that with a couple shots for the Pub ad cause their shoes could be seen.
But yeah, if I have some time tomorrow I can try editing the coffee shop one also.
I definitely think you need a soundtrack throughout both this and the bar one. It just feels unfinished when you can hear all the cafe chatter. I agree with Jeet, that a few more cuts could help. For instance, after the girl indicates 3 drinks, it goes a little too long.
Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qafsZ9e8qWs
ReplyDeleteMarina this is good. But I think we might need some more cuts! This is a lil boring. Can u try cutting every 3-5 seconds? It builds tension.
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ReplyDeleteI know you said u had problems because Maggie's shoes were in most of the other cuts, but you can scale up the video (zoom), and crop the bottom. You can do that in the viewer in FCP. I had did that with a couple shots for the Pub ad cause their shoes could be seen.
ReplyDeleteBut yeah, if I have some time tomorrow I can try editing the coffee shop one also.
I definitely think you need a soundtrack throughout both this and the bar one. It just feels unfinished when you can hear all the cafe chatter. I agree with Jeet, that a few more cuts could help. For instance, after the girl indicates 3 drinks, it goes a little too long.
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