Purple looks great. If anything, maybe give 'the' a bit more space on the right.
Red is close: 'B' on bernbach is still larger here in comparison to the rest of the word than in others (again, look at the ratio in power in your purple one).
In Red, 'gives communion over cocktail' could use a bit more fine tuning. 'Over' should be aligned with something. Maybe try all caps on HOUR.
I like the one on the baseline. Looks much more clean and is easy to read.
ReplyDeleteThe napkin is striking me a bit weird tho - mainly b/c the line is not on center with the tip of the "striped" graphic. -R
Second Burnett is best.
ReplyDeletePurple looks great. If anything, maybe give 'the' a bit more space on the right.
Red is close: 'B' on bernbach is still larger here in comparison to the rest of the word than in others (again, look at the ratio in power in your purple one).
In Red, 'gives communion over cocktail' could use a bit more fine tuning. 'Over' should be aligned with something. Maybe try all caps on HOUR.
On napkin, try ALL CAPS on 12th copy commandment. Be sure you use superscript on th after 12th.
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