Both the posterized look and typography is not working. You need a quick fix art direction change. Also, proofread (there's a 'then' where there should be a 'they') in the last one. This is a great idea but the art direction really needs a kick.
Shoot something on your own. Make it feel like it belongs to you only. Or- Maybe you need to illustrate this instead? Then carry the elements over to the rest of the campaign. -R
Both the posterized look and typography is not working. You need a quick fix art direction change. Also, proofread (there's a 'then' where there should be a 'they') in the last one. This is a great idea but the art direction really needs a kick.
ReplyDeleteumm, posterized look may not work, do you have any suggestions for that? what kind of look is better?
ReplyDeleteShoot something on your own. Make it feel like it belongs to you only. Or- Maybe you need to illustrate this instead? Then carry the elements over to the rest of the campaign. -R
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