2/27/11

Umbro 'A Frame' - Pub Ad (Cut 2)

This is the second cut. Took the previous comments in to consideration when re-editing. Also, added music. Hope its better now. Let me know :) Thanks!


Direct Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VP-N9ZuZO5o

Ps: Is the VO okay? Typography? Do we need a product shot?

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  1. InstructorMarch 2, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    no, you don't need a product shot. The brand typography is working fine. I'm not a fan of the sharp edges on the type you've chosen for your tagline tho. It feels a bit "sharp." The counters are a bit tight too. -- not something I want to feel in shoes. Timing feels good, and the sound is nicely done. -R

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