I thought that this could help with developing PreKick. Each page includes a tittle and then a description of what you are seeing, along with how to transition to the next page. Let me know if there are any spots where things get too complicated or need to be changed.
This definitely needs to assist the pages in the communication of your group's big idea. Two suggestions:
1. Keep this very action oriented. Consider using bread/crumb to identify where pages fall (not on site, but above descriptor copy) to illuminate the path of action the user took to arrive at this page. This way, you don't have to explain what they clicked, just the purpose of each page. 2. Make sure you're not creating redundancy. For instance, if you identify the page by name above (Film Page), you don't need to do so in the copy.
Got it, sorry for the redundancy I was including this in hopes that it would clear up any possible confusion designing the site. I think that if we show everything that is on the slides visually along with a voice over, we will have something that we can submit to Kickstarter. I had some of the voice over done last week, and am making revisions and adding to it now, I will post it later tonight, and bring it to class tomorrow.
I thought that this could help with developing PreKick. Each page includes a tittle and then a description of what you are seeing, along with how to transition to the next page. Let me know if there are any spots where things get too complicated or need to be changed.
ReplyDeleteThis definitely needs to assist the pages in the communication of your group's big idea. Two suggestions:
ReplyDelete1. Keep this very action oriented. Consider using bread/crumb to identify where pages fall (not on site, but above descriptor copy) to illuminate the path of action the user took to arrive at this page. This way, you don't have to explain what they clicked, just the purpose of each page.
2. Make sure you're not creating redundancy. For instance, if you identify the page by name above (Film Page), you don't need to do so in the copy.
Got it, sorry for the redundancy I was including this in hopes that it would clear up any possible confusion designing the site. I think that if we show everything that is on the slides visually along with a voice over, we will have something that we can submit to Kickstarter. I had some of the voice over done last week, and am making revisions and adding to it now, I will post it later tonight, and bring it to class tomorrow.
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