- Need favicon - Reduce outer glow of book - Go with gold, not red
Grab 2:
- Again, no red - Remove the #1 before the question. - Remove the hand-drawn cloud. - Receive has a type-o in the headline. - I'm not sure the hairlines are working. It feels a little lopsided. If you keep them, at least close off the box around halo.
Grab 3:
Why the white headline all of a sudden? Isn't consistency one of the commandments?
Grab 4:
- 'Enter' link is misleading. You just told me I couldn't enter. Is it 'Proceed to Purgatory' or something more clear?
Grab 1
ReplyDelete- Need favicon
- Reduce outer glow of book
- Go with gold, not red
Grab 2:
- Again, no red
- Remove the #1 before the question.
- Remove the hand-drawn cloud.
- Receive has a type-o in the headline.
- I'm not sure the hairlines are working. It feels a little lopsided. If you keep them, at least close off the box around halo.
Grab 3:
Why the white headline all of a sudden? Isn't consistency one of the commandments?
Grab 4:
- 'Enter' link is misleading. You just told me I couldn't enter. Is it 'Proceed to Purgatory' or something more clear?
Also, copy edits were posted under JP's post.