Lol the second image is funny. You should try to use more like that. The first image is not as funny.
Maybe u can also show some Yellow Card (which is for warnings) images. An example of a warning might be a bad pick up line? Or if someone says a curse word in a classroom while speaking the the professor? - Maybe if the professor is friends with the student on facebook, he could give that student a yellow card. Idk, but we need to think of more situations that are funny!
Like the concept, but your Type is not there. The image and type aren't working together as a design yet. It just feels placed over. The font is too block-like and "stencil-like" right now. Remember, this is the "perfect world" of your Book - so make everything beautiful and polished. -R
Lol the second image is funny. You should try to use more like that. The first image is not as funny.
ReplyDeleteMaybe u can also show some Yellow Card (which is for warnings) images. An example of a warning might be a bad pick up line? Or if someone says a curse word in a classroom while speaking the the professor? - Maybe if the professor is friends with the student on facebook, he could give that student a yellow card. Idk, but we need to think of more situations that are funny!
Like the concept, but your Type is not there. The image and type aren't working together as a design yet. It just feels placed over. The font is too block-like and "stencil-like" right now. Remember, this is the "perfect world" of your Book - so make everything beautiful and polished. -R
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