Showing posts with label Suruchi. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Suruchi. Show all posts
5/6/11
5/4/11
Ducati Progressive Outdoor
We would use these lines to give hints at a story utilizing billboards one after the other. i.e. the billboards people see everyday sitting in traffic to and from the bridge. The image we have is coming into the city across the bridge with two billboards in one frame. We would change these every 2 weeks or so until the story is complete.
1. This is something dirty.
I want the world to watch.
2. You make me tremble.
You make my toes curl.
3. There’s only one way to turn you on.
Your distinct chatter gets me every time.
1. This is something dirty.
I want the world to watch.
2. You make me tremble.
You make my toes curl.
3. There’s only one way to turn you on.
Your distinct chatter gets me every time.
4/20/11
Kickstarter Poster line re-write- PLEASE give your opinions
Hey everyone! We are trying to take this line and make it sound more positive. I've tried re-writing it several times but I'm unsure on what works best. If you could give your opinions it would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!
ORIGINAL: Maybe it is the one off-the-wall, chance that out of the blue I'll succeed.
NEW:
It's that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I'll succeed that I strive for.
It's that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I live for.
It's that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I strive for.
It's that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I strive for. I've finally found it.
I live for that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I'll succeed.
This could be that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I'll succeed.
This could be that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I'll succeed. That's enough for me.
I'll take any off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance if it means I'll succeed.
ORIGINAL: It took a while for reality to set in, but when it did I couldn't have been more grateful.
NEW:
It took a while for reality to set in, but when it did I can't have imagined it any other way.
It took a while for reality to set in, but not that it has, I can't imagine it any other way.
Now that reality has set in, I can't imagine it any other way.
ORIGINAL: Maybe it is the one off-the-wall, chance that out of the blue I'll succeed.
NEW:
It's that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I'll succeed that I strive for.
It's that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I live for.
It's that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I strive for.
It's that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I strive for. I've finally found it.
I live for that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I'll succeed.
This could be that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I'll succeed.
This could be that one off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance that I'll succeed. That's enough for me.
I'll take any off-the-wall, out-of-the-blue chance if it means I'll succeed.
ORIGINAL: It took a while for reality to set in, but when it did I couldn't have been more grateful.
NEW:
It took a while for reality to set in, but when it did I can't have imagined it any other way.
It took a while for reality to set in, but not that it has, I can't imagine it any other way.
Now that reality has set in, I can't imagine it any other way.
4/10/11
Kickstarter: App: Page 2: Round 2
These follow the line "Dreams are followed" on the first page of the application. I think these go more along the lines of "You never fail. You just didn't succeed the first time."
1. 1st, 2nd, or 120th draft... as long as you get there.
2. As long as you make it, it doesn’t matter how long it takes.
3. Step 1, step 2, step 5 or step 10. Just keep going.
3. This is the only thing that you have complete control over.
4. The only thing you have control over is your dreams.
5. The only thing you have control over: your dreams.
6. The only thing you have control of is your dreams.
7. You can either give up now or see where it can take you.
8. You can either stop now or see where your dream takes you.
9. Success will only come when you make the decision to move forward.
10. You have two choices: 1. Go after yours. or 2. Don’t
11. Step 1: Decide what you want. Step 2: Go after it.
12. Just because the first one didn’t work doesn’t mean the 2nd won’t.
13. The 1st time may not work, but the 2nd, 3rd, or 4th one might.
14. The 1st time may not work, but that doesn’t mean the last one won’t.
15. You might not succeed the 1st time, but the last time will.
16. The 1st try may not work, but the last one will.
17. The 1st try may not work, but the next one might.
18. Take as many tries as you need to make it work.
19. Figure out what you want. Go after it.
20. Figure out what you want and then go after it.
21. Figure out what you want and then sort out the details.
22. Figure out what you want. Sort out the details. Watch it grow.
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