Hi, I just edited the stacking at the bottom of the print ads (logo, tagline, QR code & phone camera). So our final ones could look like this. What do you think? pls give me the feedback. Thank you.
They both have a similar blend of nostalgic / vintage meets modern type treatments.
On 'Girls like guys', make sure the leading is consistent. It seems less between 'girls like' and 'guys' than 'guys' and 'who are'.
On 'Impress her', try putting 'is' in a circle to give it more balance between the two hairlines.
Third ad needs some work. The bottom part should say 'video game achievements, less so.' That part needs more fine tuning. It feels like an afterthought. Also, stick with the same weight you've used in previous ads. The serif font here feels too narrow and there's no Helvetica.
much better. They look like you cared about it now. -R
ReplyDeleteIcon treatment is much better.
ReplyDeleteCopy should be: Receive an unearned sense of do-gooderness. Left justify this text.
For logo treatment, do not use oxfam icon as the 'O'. Try ALL CAPS on tagline.
Check out these two sites:
http://kellianderson.com/blog/2011/01/collaborative-fund-is-up/
http://galp.in/
They both have a similar blend of nostalgic / vintage meets modern type treatments.
On 'Girls like guys', make sure the leading is consistent. It seems less between 'girls like' and 'guys' than 'guys' and 'who are'.
On 'Impress her', try putting 'is' in a circle to give it more balance between the two hairlines.
Third ad needs some work. The bottom part should say 'video game achievements, less so.' That part needs more fine tuning. It feels like an afterthought. Also, stick with the same weight you've used in previous ads. The serif font here feels too narrow and there's no Helvetica.