Don't capitalize the 'c' in .com. Add '?' after all of your main nav items. If all of the graphics have 'energy collection' above, couldn't you simplify that? Eliminate it on all and instead just say it once in relation to all the graphs?
On the homepage, can you post the copy in the comments area so I can edit it easier?
Our EnergyCollector has been tasked with the gathering of excess energy that we spend in a daily basis. Most of the time, we spend more energy than actually needed in many of our activities. Our collector aims to accumulate this wasted energy and put it to good use. This website provides live data from the energy gathered at various locations across the UK and will keep you updated on what's to come.
Don't capitalize the 'c' in .com. Add '?' after all of your main nav items. If all of the graphics have 'energy collection' above, couldn't you simplify that? Eliminate it on all and instead just say it once in relation to all the graphs?
ReplyDeleteOn the homepage, can you post the copy in the comments area so I can edit it easier?
Our EnergyCollector has been tasked with the gathering of excess energy that we spend in a daily basis. Most of the time, we spend more energy than actually needed in many of our activities. Our collector aims to accumulate this wasted energy and put it to good use. This website provides live data from the energy gathered at various locations across the UK and will keep you updated on what's to come.
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