hi I'm not in your class, but figured I'd comment anyhow..
I really like the color palate and the off white background. The type layout looks really cool, but it seems like the symbols (arrows) you have with the words aren't really matching what the copy is saying.
Examples:
on the 2nd one where it says "give up" the up is lower than the give. If you flipped it to face the outside then "up" will be up.
on the second one where it says "why" maybe there could be little question marks inside of the green circles.
hi I'm not in your class, but figured I'd comment anyhow..
ReplyDeleteI really like the color palate and the off white background. The type layout looks really cool, but it seems like the symbols (arrows) you have with the words aren't really matching what the copy is saying.
Examples:
on the 2nd one where it says "give up" the up is lower than the give. If you flipped it to face the outside then "up" will be up.
on the second one where it says "why" maybe there could be little question marks inside of the green circles.
just a thought :)
I heart your work hehehe :)
ReplyDeletethey look really cool. I love how you play around & arrange your copy with typography. Very nice.