Okay, I understand the idea. However, I think you should make the stories tie in with Kickstarter more. Right now this ad could be for any creative website. Think about what makes Kickstarter different. Maybe you can tie the stories in with the work that the characters are seeking funding for on Kickstarter. For example, in the 2nd radio ad about John, maybe you can somehow showcase the mathmetician's dice in his story. Like how the dice could make his morning commute less problematic? And how Kickstarter can help make that happen through funding.
The dice might not be a good project/product to showcase. Look into some more revolutionary projects on Kickstarter. Projects that make peoples lives easier and better, and then use those in your stories.
Right now I just feel the stories and the announcer comments don't match! The stories seem random. I understand that that is perhaps the intention, but it sounds a lil cheesy.
Okay, I understand the idea. However, I think you should make the stories tie in with Kickstarter more. Right now this ad could be for any creative website. Think about what makes Kickstarter different. Maybe you can tie the stories in with the work that the characters are seeking funding for on Kickstarter. For example, in the 2nd radio ad about John, maybe you can somehow showcase the mathmetician's dice in his story. Like how the dice could make his morning commute less problematic? And how Kickstarter can help make that happen through funding.
ReplyDeleteThe dice might not be a good project/product to showcase. Look into some more revolutionary projects on Kickstarter. Projects that make peoples lives easier and better, and then use those in your stories.
Right now I just feel the stories and the announcer comments don't match! The stories seem random. I understand that that is perhaps the intention, but it sounds a lil cheesy.
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