2/24/11

copybook posters - Jess T.







2 comments:

  1. On yellow, align 'takes an oath' with something. It feels like it's floating. The 'when and burnett' looks a lot better but once you bring lowercase in, it gets funky.

    On purple, your text that is cropped is still visible. Clipping mask mishap?

    On red, 'b' on 'bernbach' is HUGE. Look at the 'p' on 'power' in your purple comp for example.

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  2. I agree with the B and P ratios. That a second look at those. Don't be shy about your lowercase, find a way to make it work. -Roger

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