2/25/11

Oxfam iPhone App

Hi,
This is Oxfam iPhone App mock-up. Pls give me the feedback.
JP wrote the App description for this iPhone App, so do I need to put it in the 1st composition or where can I put that description?

My question is Rain Forest & Health Care is one word or two words???

I appreciate it again if you pls help me with finding the typo. Thank you.

2 comments:

  1. you guys must be really in love with that Donate button. Isn't there a way you can clean that up? It fees like an extra graphic icon that doesn't need to be there. Otherwise, these are looking much better. -R

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  2. Both rainforest and healthcare should be one word, no space. On app, delete 'save the' before rainforest.

    You'll also need to change name of app once JP provides correction.

    Your icon looks pixelated. Why?

    Remember on the last two screens -- donate should be moved up next to hunger and there should be a drop down when you select how much $$$ you'll donate.

    'back' button doesn't fit with art direction.

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